Nice trip, good day planning and good planning for the childrens age
Good. but: The family includes a father (47), a mother (45) and three children a boy (15) and a twin that are
girls (17). They live close to Amsterdam and they want to go on holiday.
i think when you say that, it seems like the holiday is only for families which are exactly like that. you could better
have said that it is an example that would make it clearer.
But it's good!
Kimm0rd
I think it is a good site and it is also a nice idea to chose
a family but it is not very likely
that there are families like that look accactly like yours.
Myrte.
You planned the holiday very well, you thought of all different and nice things to do,
in and around Budapest. But for a summer holiday, 10 days are a bit short.
Too bad that there are some errors in the text, one of you should have checked that.
For the rest I want to give my compliments.
Sophie.
The family includes a father (47), a mother (45) and three children a boy (15) and a twin that are
girls (17). They live close to Amsterdam and they want to go on holiday.
Maybe you can say , in the beginning, more about your holiday and after that, introduce the family you're going
to use. It is a very nice idea. I think lots of people would like this holiday, but if they see the first sentence, they'll
think their children have to be exactly like that. But, it's still a very nice idea.
The points about Budapest are very nice! I think that most people will like your holiday immediately! They can
see everything easy. It's in general, very nice!
Vicky Z.